Saturday, 11 January 2014

Strangers in the Night~Sinatra~100 words,nearly.



Then, there were three.


The boy with the typical stud air about him, approached her,she looked on apprehensively.


She nodded and moved away. He followed her but i asked him to let her be,he gave me a dirty look and when i tried to obstruct the way,he shoved and hurled some abuses towards me.


He lunged towards her but she turned and pushed her hand towards his face. His body stiffened and he fell forward as she moved away with a sneer.


Chloroform-our weapon of choice.


We patted him down,stripped him off his valuables and also clothes-for good measure.


She seductively gave a peck on my lips.


We were a good team.


All this in a span of two minutes.


We had to go back to our earlier stance of being strangers in the night.


22 comments:

  1. Oh wow! That was a really good take on the prompt...loved it! :)

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  2. An unexpected twist in the tale, nice :)

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  3. Superb! Where were you all this while madame? :D Perfect use of prompt :)

    Richa

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    1. Thank you :D
      I have been freelancing for a while,but the blog is new :)
      Twists are tantalising and good.

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  4. Interesting..
    A different twist to the prompt.

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    1. The idea was to pack a punch.
      :)
      Thanks.

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  5. Nice take, very well scripted..love the Strangers in the Night.
    Cheerz

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  6. A twist in the tale! Loved it :)

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  7. WOW! This is a a very different approach. nice writing.

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  8. Partners in crime! Interesting read, great twist in the tale :)

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  9. WOW! this was an awesome take on the prompt! :)

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